bright blue morning sky
harbor ice has split in two
thoughts of the high seas
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Christine Smith-Johnson
2012/01/25 at 23:29
Beautiful picture you painted
fivereflections
2012/01/26 at 00:46
@christine thank you very much
wordsweneversaid
2012/01/25 at 23:46
*smile* you must live in the most beautiful place in the world – I always feel so ‘there’ when you describe it.
M.L.
fivereflections
2012/01/26 at 00:56
@ML thank you for your comments – being transported by a few words is a ride i certainly enjoy!
Gloria Richard Author
2012/01/26 at 07:30
I can picture it now…
orofiorentino
2012/01/26 at 08:01
Veramente molto bello, mi piace molto come scrivi i tuoi Haiku. Hai uno stile inconfondibile e bellissimo. Ciaoooooo
celestealluvial
2012/01/26 at 09:13
Pleasant! :)
Linda
2012/01/26 at 10:05
Since I started reading your blog I’ve been constructing haiku’s in my head every morning ;)
newwhitebear
2012/01/26 at 12:01
It’ a beutiful image “blue morning sky”.
I see it and dream.
Greetings
Folding Mirror Poetry
2012/01/26 at 12:57
Thanks for visiting my site, and leading me here. Great poetry and nice friendly ambience. Thanks.
cessology
2012/01/26 at 15:45
now i have a severe case of 5-7-5. Poetic!
Yousei Hime
2012/01/26 at 20:50
I like how the middle line “splits” the images. Almost feels like a hint of spring, and we haven’t had February.
Betty Hayes Albright
2012/01/26 at 22:39
Lovely!!
Vampire Weather
2012/01/27 at 01:41
A delightful word picture!
mohinancy1405
2012/01/27 at 12:45
buon fini *_* settimana
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Fish & Bicycles
2012/01/27 at 13:17
Wonderful, packing so much imagery and possibility into three lines!
Fergiemoto
2012/01/27 at 16:49
This poem creates a nice vision!
Russell Smith
2012/01/27 at 19:20
Like Linda, I find myself constructing haikus in my head, only mine fall far short of the beauties you create. Like others, I see the place you seem to live and wish to be there too. I live in L.A. the place without seasons, well the seasons come and go but they are very subtle. I miss the lavish weather of the East Coast where I grew up. All the best to you! Russell
Ninni Raimondi
2012/01/28 at 20:06
It’s wonder “land” in the everybody heart.
Bye
Eric Alagan
2012/01/29 at 05:58
For me, it speaks of the harbour at long last clear…and promise of adventure….the cycle continues.
susartandfood
2012/01/29 at 13:24
Amazing how so few words can have so much to say. Very nice.
lorrelee1970
2012/01/29 at 20:30
You are just the haiku king. Another nice one.
"Sussurri del cuore"
2012/02/12 at 05:21
Armonia nelle tue parole
splendido haiku
Un caro saluto
Trisch